Monday, September 10, 2012

Show Me! Don't tell me....

Students: 
Please fix this boring sentence!

Mrs. Underwood was happy.

23 comments:

  1. Mrs.Underwood was as happy as a dog eating bacon
    -mckenzie

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  2. Mrs.Underwood was as happy as a deer finding a pile of corn.

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  3. Caitlyn (Your AWSOME Student)September 13, 2012 at 11:10 AM

    Mrs.Underwood was so happy so almost exploded with happiness!!!!!

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    1. mrs underwood is as happy as a dog playing fetch /Haley

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  4. Mrs.Underwood was as happy as a bunny eating carrots!

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  5. Mrs.Underwood was as happy as a hamster running on the excersize wheel

    Lauren

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  6. Mrs. Underwood was as happy as Brady eating ice cream.

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  7. Mrs.Underwood was happier than a cow in a lake on a hot day.

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    1. mrs underwood was as happy as a mouse eating cheese.

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  8. Mrs.Underwood is as happy as a football team that just won the super bowl.

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  9. Mrs.Underwood had just bought the winning lottery ticket. She took out a coin and scratched off the the numbers. when she found out that she had just won. she jumpped with joy.

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  10. Mrs.Underwood was so joyful she was as happy as a person winning the lottery. She was howling with joy. YIPEE!! Mrs.Underwood was bursting with excitement.

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  11. Mrs. Underwood was so happy she skipped through the halls, smiled all day, and tossed flower petals from a basket.

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  12. Caitlyn (Your AWSOME reading student)September 13, 2012 at 11:25 AM

    Mrs.Underwood was so happy.She just found out all of her students got all A's on their report cards!She was jumping around like she just won the lottery,but even though she didn't,it felt like it to her.She was about to explode with JOY!She got so excited she gave all the students ice cream after school!

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  13. Mrs.Underwood was so happy that she acted like she was just handed a million dollards. She was so anxious that she ran out of the room yelling "I'm going to go buy a car" and the class started to running after herand was also yelling "i want one too." Mrs.Underwood stopped and said "oh no this is my money your not having any of it so hahahahahha."

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  14. MeAsia Arnaz Hall-LacySeptember 13, 2012 at 6:24 PM

    Mrs. Underwood was so happy she almost popped a button off her jacket.

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  15. Caitlyn Your AWSOME studentSeptember 16, 2012 at 7:12 PM

    Everyone did a good job with this Mrs.Underwood!!!!!!

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  16. Mrs.Underwood,
    I can't wait for your next blog!! I want to write some more....
    So Bad!!

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  17. I can't wait for your next blog! Mrs.Underwood this is so much fun.

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  18. Mrs.Underwood is so happy she cried for joy.

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  19. Mrs.Underwood was as happy as a monkey eating bannanas.

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  20. Mrs.Underwood is as happy as a monkey eating bannanas.

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  21. So crazy then again so true and funny! Please post your next blog! im going crazy to see your next comments and show me dont tell me sentences
    :)Starla

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